Sorry guys, I have decided to withdraw this story. Partly because a friend from the board advised me the HP publishers are quite keen to sue. Also, to be frank, because I have a lot of respect for the HP books and it did feel too much like taking the piss to publish an HP inspired story here.
A pity in some ways. For one it seems like one of the few proper stories I've managed to come up with. Rather than the usual ramblings led purely by my fantasies this story actually has an ending - or will have when I finish it, today probably. And I found that using the symbolism of the battle between good and evil in the Harry Potter world didn't just allow me to bring some essentials of what I find such a turn on about smoking to light, it actually sheds light on the some of the conflicts I feel about our (my) fetish.
So, if anyone would like to contact me for a private discussion about that, feel free.
