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Postby Roller » Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:22 am

This one's entirely inspired by one of cigarwatcher's suggestions on SmokinMen.com. Of course, I take full responsibility for style, characters and content. Especially for the fact the central character's camp as a row of tents. :roll:


Chapter One

“Don't you think its absolutely divine darling. Terribly, terribly Noel Coward.” This was said, in appropriately clipped tones, by a slender young man with tousled blonde hair and engagingly bright blue eyes to his rather more muscular, dark haired and tanned companion. There had been quite a few disappointed admirers when these two got it together earlier in the year.
“I knew it was a mistake to bring you here. Its a 70s party, dingbat.”
“But its just too too irresistible.”
Ben had known Keith would be in his element in a vintage clothing shop, but how typical that he'd find the oldest thing there. But he couldn't help smiling, Keith was glowing with excitement as he held up the garment for closer examination.
“You've already got a dressing gown.” A very short one, Ben had bought to show his legs.
“Philistine, this is a smoking jacket.”
“Like you need one of those.” Ben and Keith were nice boys, aside from a certain abandon in the bedroom, heath, sauna..., and didn't smoke.
“But its magnificent, pure silk, just feel it, it's exquisite.”
Ben duly felt the cloth, and despite himself was impressed, it felt like water, clinging to his hands.
“That'll feel so nice on, against bare skin. And anyway I'll catch my death in that negligée you got me.”
“That...” Ben sputtered, he was always defenceless against Keith's teasing.
“That negligee is delightful, perfect for when I'm feeling tarty, but sometimes one wants elegance.” he held up the smoking jacket, struck a pose and announced, “And its only twenty pounds. I'm having it.”
Only Ben thought, but he knew better than to argue with that tone.
“OK. But now can we look at jackets.”
“Of course,” Keith said, giving Ben a quick kiss and draping the shining blue and red smoking jacket over his arm. “Oh look.”
Of course it wasn't the leather jacket Ben was after.
“My god, what are they?”
“Loons.”
“Loons? They look like flares to me.”
“They are dear, deliciously big flares from the knee, but skin tight above.”
The magic of the words 'skin tight' had their usual effect. They were the softest well worn denim from the knee up, but joined by a v shaped seam to a purple denim spreading out to truly enormous flares. The 70s, so outrageous. Ben took the loons then got distracted. Finally, jackets, black leather a whole rack of them and...
“Oh yes, Oh yes.” He held up a black leather jacket, nicely worn looking, fringed on the chest and under arms, rows of studs in all the right places. “That's the one.”
“Put it on.”
As Ben slipped on the jacket he felt its heaviness, a close but comfortable fit. Sensuous, and there was a distinct, spicy smell to the jacket too.
“Wow.” Keith said, he always had the hots for Ben, but in the jacket, “Go on, try the pants.”
Skin tight was the word, but Keith was all smiles, they just felt so good, like they'd been made for him. Suddenly, as if by magic, the shop owner appeared.
“Shall I wrap them for you, sir?”
“What? Oh yes, thanks. Party you know, 70s.”
“Perhaps these shoes?”
The curious looking shop keeper offered up a pair of platform boots, green and purple, the purple. The shoes fitted too and as he looked at Ben in them, mentally adding the gross polyester Californian shirt and medallion they'd got earlier, Keith wondered if he might even out shine his own Ziggy Stardust recreation.
“Jealous?”
“Madly. The true 70s porn star look. Pray to god they don't have vintage underwear.”
“You kidding, in these,” he ran his hands over the clinging denim, “I'm going cammo. You can see the seams, right?”
“Darling, I'm not looking at the seams.”
And the bulge he was looking at grew just a little in appreciation.
A few minutes later the two lads emerged from the gloom of the shop on to the bright street each clutching parcels, actually wrapped in brown paper and tied with string. The weirdo who ran that shop was nothing if not authentic. And he had great stuff. They were going to knock 'em dead tomorrow night.

They had only a short walk to drop off their parcels at their flat. Of course separately they never have been able to afford one of those loft style places in the converted mill. It even had a balcony overlooking the river. Their friends joked that at 25 they were getting old, but there was envy too, though that was tempered considerably by the frequent parties, dinners, Sunday lunches. As Keith put it, if you've got it, flaunt it. Being a Friday they ate out, did the usual round of the bars in the gay quarter, gossiped, flirted a little, danced a lot and, feeling only a little bit like an old married couple, left the heave of bodies a little after midnight. Some time later they lay on the bed together. Keith's gaze lingering over Ben's body where, satisfied, he'd dropped as usual into deep sleep. Fascinated as always he admired the gleam of sweat on his lover's muscled back, enjoyed that special moment of peacefulness then carefully pulled the cover over him, got up and wandered into the open living room. The night breeze from the open windows cooled his skin. So nice to be cool again, still... The, with a smile he opened one of the brown paper parcels, took out the smoking jacket and slipped it on. It felt lovely, he heavy silk clinging. And so elegant, the mirror confirmed. He poured himself a brandy and added ice since it was such a warm night, then went out onto the balcony to enjoy the distant night sounds of the city, the light on the water. Letting the warmth and fragrance of the spirit linger in his mouth Keith was only aware his hand was running over the silk clinging to his thigh when its movement was interrupted. There was something in the pocket of the jacket. Curious. In the half dark he couldn't tell if it was silver or gold, it felt quite heavy but then he was no judge really. It certainly seemed quality though. Well, that was a bit of luck. Must be worth at least what he'd paid for the smoking jacket. How appropriate, a cigarette lighter. Could it be vintage 30s like the jacket? Idly he wondered how it might work, found the whole top flipped up. You couldn't see the join. So, that cylinder on the corner that fell under your thumb must... wow, it worked. In the light of the yellow flame he still couldn't tell if it was silver or gold. He did see the word, Dunhill, in a very Art Deco script, discretely under the lid. He flipped the lid back down with the faintest sound between a click and a clunk, then up again, flick and the flame, just under an inch high reappeared. He played with the lighter a few more times, finding it worked first time every time, then placed it by the brandy glass. Funny how you don't really think about words sometimes. Words like, smoking jacket, only now Keith felt a connection with an imagined original owner who wore this jacket for smoking cigarettes which he lit with that lighter. Could that be the origin of that slight lingering fragrance it had, something muskier than a cologne. Amazing. Of course, what would be absolutely amazing was if in the other pocket... Now Keith was feeling a wee bit spooked. He was almost certain in the shop that the pockets had been empty. He couldn't really have missed something like the silver cigarette case he now had in his hand could he? Though it was elegantly slim, slightly curved so it had fitted perfectly against his thigh. Like the lighter it had that slightly heavy solid feeling of quality. Small objects of desire. It had that quality, like a mobile phone, of being almost sensuous to hold. Part of that innocent age when smoking was glamorous. Feeling, as he secretly did from time to time, just a little like Fred Astaire Keith pressed the catch pretending to offer a cigarette to the Ginger Rogers of his dreams (who was quietly dreaming inside, or was it the other way round and he was Ginger). No, surely not. But there they were, six pristine white cigarettes in a row held under a narrow silver band. Somehow they looked old fashioned, but that was daft surely. A vintage cigarette case yes. Vintage cigarettes no. Still they were unfiltered and he thought uncertainly weren't they a little thicker than modern cigarettes. Anyway if they were 70 or 80 years old they must be absolutely desiccated. But a quick sniff revealed a fresh, rich, almost spicy aroma. Now Keith had tried smoking, once, out of curiosity. The Marlboro light he'd accepted from an acquaintance in a bar one drunken night had smelt a bit like this. Well, only a little. It hadn't smelt anything like as good. This was like the best artisan bakery bread compared to white sliced supermarket trash. Well, it was only natural, he told himself, to be curious. After all what harm could one cigarette be. He felt like he owed it to the jacket. After all it was a smoking jacket. So with just the slightest feeling of the forbidden Keith took one of the cigarettes from the case, toyed with it for a moment to get the right air of elegance he then picked up the lighter. By its light he could see clearly to bring the flame into place, he sucked gently, the tip of the cigarette glowed orange and he tasted the smoke. Wow, intense, rich. He let the smoke linger in his mouth a while. When he blew it out the smoke stood out clearly against the distant light. Goodness, that was actually quite nice. Of course cigarettes must have been much stronger in those days and maybe he shouldn't inhale but it had been so smooth. Tentatively he inhaled just a little. Oh, that's not bad, feels quite nice really, and the exhale looked much better. He certainly felt it too, a feeling, mostly in his head, that was both calming and a little bit exciting. Curiously he felt his cock stirring a bit against the smooth silk. Well there was a certain naughtiness to smoking like this. He wasn't sure Ben would understand but what the hell, might was well make the most of it. So he risked a longer drag, savoured the taste in his mouth again. It felt quite natural to inhale, the cool air pleasant as it followed the smoke into his lungs. He seemed to feel the smoke there, heavy but in a way nice and then he exhaled, the smoke looking even better in the night air as pleasure spread through his body, up into his head. And down to his dick, which twitched positively.
“Hmm, you like that then.” he said to himself as he idly stroked his bulge through the silk. Feeling his excitement rapidly rising he gazed a moment at the smoke curling up from the cigarette in his hand and realised he liked the feeling of smoking a cigarette like this. That one Marlboro light he'd tried seemed like a pale imitation, this was a real smoke, stronger yet smoother. Tempting. And he remembered Oscar's advice when faced with temptation. Yield. He brought up the cigarette again, opening the smoking jacket with his other hand. Dimly he was aware that, if he wasn't exactly high he was certainly out of it, under the influence, not longer thinking just going with the sensation. He hardly had to think about inhaling, just did what felt good. The smoke he exhaled down his belly and over his very hard dick seemed more plentiful. A firm stroke up the shaft of his cock pushed a bead of pre-cum from his slit which he spread with his thumb, feelings tingling up his spine. He breathed deeply, feeling how alive his body was to pleasure as he began stroking knowing he wanted to cum again. Leaning back and getting into the familiar pleasure building under his hand he took another drag, deliberately inhaling deeper, absorbing more, exhaling more powerfully, knowing how the pleasure would shoot through his body. The thought, 'God, I can see why this is addictive', passed through his mind raising his excitement so his cock was getting slick as he took another drag. And now the cigarette was hot in his fingers and he saw it was done. He flicked the glowing end over the rail and down into the river pumping his cock all the time. He didn't want to stop now. He'd never thought smoking would feel so hot. He even liked the lingering smell on his fingers. Playing now he picked up the cigarette case, pressed its cool metal against the underside of his balls. But then he began to feel it begin to slip away. Well he had cum once already, and less than half an hour ago. It was only smoking got him so horny. He could have another. He knew he probably shouldn't, but the way his dick responded to the thought told him he would. He delayed a little, mucking round, holding the unlit cigarette in the hand that was working his dick. Kind of getting off on the sight, but not so much as knowing he wanted to light it. To feel that feeling as he inhaled. So wrong, but he wanted it. Which only got him more excited as he swapped hands a moment to pick up the lighter, cigarette dangling from his lip. A pause as he lit up, inhaled and felt the sensation reclaim him. Giving into it he worked his dick on automatic while he concentrated on smoking, feeding his body and mind with smoke. Such an amazing feeling. 'Don't kid yourself, you know you want it', he'd tell himself before taking another drag, deeper than the one before. 'You know you can't resist it' he said to himself before inhaling so sharply his breath hissed the smoke deep into his lungs.
“Oh god, fuck it, you're a smoker.” he said out loud just as cum shot from his dick up onto his chest and face. As his deep panting breaths slowed he could feel his head literally buzzing from the two cigarettes he'd smoked. What an amazing feeling. And what an orgasm. Gradually he came back to earth. Slightly surprised he saw there was still three quarters of an inch of the cigarette left burning in his fingertips. The excitement fading it seemed really weird, and wrong, obviously. There was no way he was going to start smoking. Still, there were four left. Could do this a couple more times maybe. And with that thought he took a final drag and flicked the butt over the raid watching the tip spark till it hit the river. Then he wiped his chest, washed hands and face, cleaned his teeth and joined Ben in bed.
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Re: Jacket

Postby Black » Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:09 am

Superb!

I had also been considering this as a great idea for a story, but am definately glad a writer of your calibre took the challenge.

A great start to an engaging saga, I feel.

Part one was extremely hot!
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Re: Jacket

Postby Roller » Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:00 am

Chapter Two

When Keith woke Ben was already up and he could hear the shower going. He got up, the smoking jacket wasn't there so he put on the short white gown Ben had given him and went to join him in the shower.

“You know, that is my smoking jacket.” Keith said as he sat while Ben fixed breakfast.
“Yes dear, but you're right it feels so good on. I couldn't resist.”
Keith wasn't really complaining, it did look good on Ben, the heavy silk seemed to cling to Ben's body showing off his strong shoulders, seeming to work its way into the crack between his ass cheeks, hugging his well developed thighs. The swirls of the deep blue and red paisley pattern complimenting the smooth tanned skin. Drawn he wandered over, slid a hand over his back and down to cup one cheek through the silk.
“Hey, don't distract me or these'll be burnt.”
He stayed close touching unobtrusively so Ben, as usual could produce a stack of perfect pancakes. It was an indulgence they'd work off in the gym or pool later (an expensive asset of the building they were determined to make the most of). Offsetting the sinful pancakes with fresh fruit and yoghurt was undone by lashings of thick maple syrup. Nevertheless they were both feeling the warm glow inside you get from food made and eaten with love when Keith went to the machine, ground the blue mountain beans he'd got specially that week and made two cups of intensely black coffee. He was on his way back to the table when Ben said, “Hey, what's this?” holding up the Dunhill lighter.
“Oh yeah,” Keith felt like he was faking nonchalance a little as he came over to look, placing a hand on Ben's shoulder, “Kind of a bonus that came with the smoking jacket. Its antique, well, vintage anyway. There's a cigarette case too.” because he was feeling just a tiny bit shifty about his late night smoke he was deliberately being up front about it. “Try the other pocket.”
“Oh god, yeah. That's... well, that's real quality isn't it.”
“Yeah. Dunhill I think.” In the morning light Keith could see the case was in mint condition, crisp engine turning, very Deco. “I'd have to have a close look but I think they're both solid silver. Probably worth a whole lot more than the jacket.”
“Cool.” Ben said, as he popped open the case. Keith's heart flipped just a little, what would he make of that? Ben was even more health conscious than he was. Plus he caught the fresh scent of cigarettes, blending so nicely with the fragrant coffee. Madness but he wanted one. Time to act casual. He put Ben's coffee down and sat down.
“Wild, vintage cigarettes too eh?”
To Keith's surprise Ben had one of the cigarettes in his hand. That was so weird. It ought to have looked so wrong, like Ben wearing a blazer (in a jolly yachting way that is, not a slutty schoolboy way, that would be... oh, get a grip Keith). No, what held his gaze was that Ben seemed completely relaxed holding the cigarette, like it was the most natural thing in the world. More than that it was positively stylish.
“You knew about these?”
“Yeah.”
“So, just when was that.”
“Last night.” He kind of wanted to get off the subject but Ben was waiting for him to go on, “After you...er.”
“Passed out, absolutely milked dry?”
“Yeah,” Keith couldn't help smiling and it felt less like an inquisition, that was probably just his guilty conscience anyway, “Well, I got up, had a drink out on the balcony as usual.”
“Really,” Ben clearly appreciated being let into one of the mysteries of their shared existence, “So that's where the brandy goes to.”
“Yeah.” Somehow Keith couldn't keep a hint of defensiveness out of his voice.
“For goodness sake, I bought it for you so you could drink it. So anyway, that's when you found these.”
“Yeah, not that I could see much in the dark.” Keith picked up the lighter. “Wow, I was right, silver, London 1932.”
“Fascinating,” Ben said dryly, “Now why would you want to change the subject? Oh let me guess, you didn't happen, just out of curiosity of course, to try one of these.”
“Well...”
“Oh you did. You naughty boy.” The playful tone wasn't what Keith expected. Clearly Ben was going to be a lot better about this than his own conscience might have been. Why did he never learn, he always was. In fact gradually he was beginning to actually believe Ben loved him. “Oh you silly boy.” Ben was beside him now, arm round his shoulders, which might have been easier without the tempting smell of the cigarette in his hand. A kiss helped more. He'd heard Ben's occasional scathing comment about smokers but clearly he was treating this like a game. He relaxed still more under Ben's understanding gaze. “You've not been worrying about something like that have you. God the odd cigarette doesn't matter. And really, what else would you do with them. We might as well smoke them.”
“We?”
“Come on, why not. Why fight it, you know I can always tempt you. Be naughty boys together?” Slightly dazed Keith looked at the cigarette case Ben was holding out to him. And he was tempted. Plus the game had become more than a little sexy. Ben was close enough for him to feel that. So he took a cigarette from the case. Ben was clearly inviting him to give a light and he realised he still had the lighter in his hand. God, he was getting hard now. Ben could always push his sexual buttons and this play at leading him astray wasn't the first of its kind. The charge was all the more potent because Ben didn't really know what was coming. He did. Knew it wasn't really an innocent game, it was a powerful addictive drug, he tried to ignore the anticipation he felt in his body for more of it and found that was all too easy. There's no way of getting out of it now Ben was expecting it. He flicked up the lid, again a flame first time. He touched it to the end of Ben's cigarette. There shouldn't be but there was this romantic sexual energy to it, then the surprise of pleasure on his face.
“Well I say.” the smile, the Bertie Wooster, accent emphasised the playfulness of it, as if they were back in that innocent age when smoking was a normal, almost expected pursuit of gentlemen.
“Allow me.” Ben took the lighter, his usual confidence adding style to the romance of lighting his cigarette. Really Keith had meant only to savour the smoke as Ben had, but once he'd tasted it and remembered the feel he inhaled. The fear that he was revealing too much skill in smoking faded as he saw only admiration in Ben's eyes. He exhaled slowly, feeling pleasure flood his body and his hard on grow as he slipped back into that relaxed horny place smoking had taken him to the night before.
“That's not fair, you were practising last night. Come on, show me how you do that.”
Keith couldn't help a feeling of unreality. Surely it could only be in a dream that it seemed right and inevitable for him to teach Ben how to smoke. Still, it was intimate and kind of sexy to have Ben watch closely as he took another lingering drag, savoured the smoke in his mouth a second or so before he slowly inhaled. Unconsciously he'd slipped his hand round Ben's waist opening the smoking jacket to reveal the proud eight inches pointing to the sky. It seemed natural playfulness to exhale that way, though the sight of smoke clinging to the flesh was almost shockingly erotic. Well you don't fight that. His hand moved down to cup a cheek as Ben copied exactly his inhale, tilted his head back a little to exhale. A small sigh of pleasure escaped him and he said, “Oh. My. God.”
“I know.”
There was a moment of intimacy when it sunk in that each was as defenceless against this feeling as the other was. Or loved it as much. Not so different really from the first time Ben dared to lick Keith's hole. Always more in the moment it was Ben who made the first move to smoke again and Keith copied and they inhaled together, exhaled together the pleasure enhanced by a kind of sexual feedback. Instinctively Keith knelt down, took Ben's lovers cock in his hand and looked up. The sexual energy flowed powerfully between them as again they inhaled then, smoke pouring from his mouth he went down on the hard cock in his hand. The moans of pleasure were only interrupted when Ben smoked again. Keith could feel him get harder as he inhaled, he looked up to catch Ben's lustful look as he exhaled smoke down into his face. Fuck yeah, no more mister nice guy, this was raw hot sex. Working the slick and hard dick with his hand Keith took a deep drag then, knowing Ben was watching, bathed the cock with smoke as he took it deep into his throat. No question this was going to be a quickie, everything about their cigarettes seemed to turn Keith on, the novel feeling of a cigarette in his hand as he wanked himself, the warmth of the smoke that rose from it on his fingers, his belly. Moments later he could taste Ben on the edge of cuming. Moving off so Ben could cum on his face he locked eyes with his lover as they worked themselves to climax. At the final moment he took a hard drag on his cigarette, compelling Ben to do the same, holding in the smoke for the last few seconds as the tension peaked and then smoke burst from their lungs and spunk covered his face as his own load shot all over the floor.
“Oh. My. God.” was all Ben could say, between their smoky kisses after. Eventually they calmed, sat, drank their coffee slightly awed by what had happened and the presence of the lighter and cigarette case on the table between them. They showered again then headed down the the gym, both working out extra hard. Well now they had cigarettes as well as pancakes to atone for.
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Re: Jacket

Postby Black » Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:46 pm

Bravo!

An excellent second chapter. It will be interesting to read how their lives now change after that morning experience.

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